Just Another Second…


Today’s poetry prompt for Writing 101 is based on the theme “Seconds”.

Antique Clock

 

“Just Another Second”

She prays for just another second

before he slips away:

just another second

until the dawn turns into day.

Just another second

to say I love you with a kiss:

just another second

and she’s left to reminisce.

By: Chattinatti ❀

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I hope you enjoyed this piece. If it impacted you in any way, feel free to let me know. πŸ™‚ x

 

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8 thoughts on “Just Another Second…

  1. Really like this, chattinatti! No suggestions to give… I really like the flow, the intro, the rhythm, the choice of words. It says a lot in a few words, and says it well. πŸ™‚

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